Thursday, 7 July 2011

Her Weekend Bodyguard (WIP) - Excerpt 2

It’s thrusty Thursday again. This week let me introduce you to the heroine of Her Weekend Bodyguard, a contemporary romance I’m currently working on. To see the previous excerpt go here.

Tari is the heiress to the Akan Oil and Gas fortunes. Beneath the femme fatale exterior, is a compassionate woman who loves easily and would do anything to protect those she loves. When pictures of her fiancé in a compromising position with a call girl are published in the gossip press just a few weeks before their wedding, she needs a place to escape the pressure from family, friends and the press for a few days. She calls up Kola, her uncle’s chief of security, whom she’s known most of her life.   

Here is my visual inspiration for Tari.

Now for the excerpt...

“Something smells good,” Tari said when she walked into the kitchen to find Kola busy preparing lunch. He was now dressed in a white t-shirt and blue denim, a manly apron wrapped around his waist. He looked gorgeously edible and a brief image of him in nothing but the apron flashed through her head.

“I hope you’re hungry. There’s plenty of food here,” he replied flashing a boyish smile that had her heart tripping over itself. It was official. This man affected her tremendously.

“I sure am. All that swimming gave me an appetite. But I have to wonder if you have what I really want to eat though.” She turned on a smile she hoped was sexy as she walked to the fridge and took out a bottle of water. Opening it she drank straight from the bottle, letting some of the water trickle down her chin as she gulped it down.

She watched Kola as he stared at her throat watching its movement while she swallowed, his brown eyes darkening to almost black, his pupils dilating and his nostrils flared. Satisfaction and anticipation washed over her as she watched Kola struggle to control his response to her words and action. She so loved pushing his buttons.

After their earlier poolside encounter she had purposefully kept away from him knowing he’d locked himself away in his study. Following her swim she had taken her book and gone into the living room to read.  The space had been very stark and masculine. Black furniture contrasting harshly against the white walls; the huge flat-screen television dominating one wall. Apart from the floor-to-ceiling mirror on one wall, there had been no pictures on the walls and the space seemed a bit impersonal as there was nothing that seemed to identify the person who lived in it. The other thing that struck her was that for a bachelor pad the house was immaculate. But then again she should have known that would be the case. Cautious and safe Kola was also organised and neat Kola.

Did the man ever let lose, she had wondered.

“Not sure what you’re hungry for but I’m making Shrimp Linguine,” he said and turned away stirring the contents of the pan.

Before Tari could spell her needs out to him, her phone started buzzing in the back pocket of her shorts. She pulled it out and without thinking answered it.


“Finally, Tari.” The exasperated voice of her fiancé came through loud and clear from the other end of the line.

“Oh, it’s you. Peter, what do you want?” She replied abruptly and rolled her eyes upwards as Kola watched her closely from across the kitchen.

“Don’t be like that. I’ve been trying to call you since last night. I went to your apartment but you weren’t there. Your parents said they don’t know where you are. Where are you?” Peter asked accusingly.

“You’ve spoken to my parents? You have a nerve after what you’ve done.”

“I had to go see them when you wouldn’t answer my calls and you weren’t in your apartment. They understand that it’s all been a misunderstanding,” Peter explained with seeming confidence.

“What?” Suddenly feeling sick, she sat down on the kitchen chair. Surely her parents could see through Peter’s act. See that he was not the choir boy they’d thought he was.

“Your parents were very reasonable. I’m hoping I can see you face to face so I can explain. Where are you?”

“Not that it’s any of your business but I’m with a friend,” Tari snapped back. She was getting tired of the conversation and fast too.

“Which of your friends? I’ve called Tamara and Haleema and they both claim they don’t know where you are. Come on, Tari. We have a wedding in a few weeks-.”

“Well, you should have thought about that before you decided to dip you dick into that Abuja whore.”

“Look here. Don’t talk to me like that. Where are you, Tari? You can’t just ignore me. Don’t you dare mess up this wedding?”

“Or you’ll do what? You can’t threaten me Peter. I’ll see you when I’m good and ready. Goodbye.”

Fuming Tari switched off the phone, her hands shaking. She dropped the phone and it clattered onto the table.

Grrr... That man! She’ll soon show him!

Sensing Kola close presence, she lifted her head. She could intuit his barely concealed rage oozing off him even before he spoke. His fists were clenched at his sides and his pulse was pounding at the base of his neck.

“Did I hear you right? Did that bastard threaten you?” Kola gritted out. She didn’t respond immediately and simply stared out the kitchen window. “Tell me. Did he?”

Tari looked at Kola. Her protector. Always quick to jump up to fight her battles. Except this time she didn’t need him doing that for her. She was an adult and could fight her own battles. Moreover she wasn’t afraid of Peter. She could take care of her fiancé. However she needed Kola in other ways, if only he would oblige her.

Standing up Tari moved closer to Kola and placed her palms against his chest. She could feel the pounding of his heart beat against her hand and heard his breathe hitch at the contact. His skin was warm to the touch even under his t-shirt.

“I can take care of Peter. He doesn’t scare me but I do know of a way you can help me,” she purred.

“Name it.” His response was quick and emphatic. Just what she was hoping for.

“Kiss me.”
So having now met both Kola and Tari, do you think they are good match? Share your thoughts on the excerpt and visual inspiration.
Have a thrusty Thursday!


  1. Very captivating, sure got my attention, now I feel like reading the before and after!!!!!!!

    Would Tari do what she is about to do and regret it later?

    Would Kola oblige her and regret it?

    Is there an unpredictable twist to the storyline???????

    Want more more more!!!!!! :)

    Have agood weekend

  2. Hello Anonymous, I'm glad you enjoyed it that much. There are certainly a few twists and turns before the story is concluded. Watch this space.

    Thanks for stopping by. And next time please leave a name or nickname so I know who to address. :o))

  3. Heyyy! You checked out my blog, so I decided to return the favor and check out yours - and I'm glad I did! FINALLY, someone who writes romance the way I like to read it! I totally relate to Tari, she's fab! I also relate to Kola (especially him!) I look forward to reading more, and will definitely be watching this space! Nice blog!

  4. Hey Marya, It's great to read your response. I write what I like to read and can only hope others enjoy it too.

    Thanks a lot. I really appreciate you stopping by.

  5. "He looked gorgeously edible and a brief image of him in nothing but the apron flashed through her head."

    My thots:

    Grrrr....that Kiru. She needs to give out cold drinks to her blog readers. Dang! Too hot in here

  6. LOL @ LD. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)

    I have to say on a heat scale of my writing, HWB comes on the scorchio end. Even I have to take trips to the cooler whilst writing it.

    Get yourself a fan. It's only gets hotter. LOL.

  7. I love it Kiru! You took the heat into the kitchen! The hero is cautious but very protective of the heroine and the passion is simmering just beneath his exterior. HOT! HOT! HOT!

  8. Thanks so much, Elaine. Kola is so gooey under the hard exterior. He is one of my fave heroes to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Cheers, KT.

  9. I loved reading your story, now I want to know more!

    The heat, the tension simmering underneath, well done, you!

  10. Ah Kiru, you know I just love these two. Dare I hope you have got Kola out of the deep freeze?

  11. Hi Nas, glad you liked it. More coming soon.

  12. Thanks Raven, Doris and Alexandra.

    I can't keep a character like Kola in deep freeze for too long. Too many sleepless nights. lol. More soon. ;)

  13. - “Not sure what you’re hungry for but I’m making Shrimp Linguine,”

    - However she needed Kola in other ways, if only he would oblige her.
    naughty, naughty ;-)

    - “Kiss me.”
    see previous comment ... hehe

    Now to answer your question, I think I need more to actually have a sense of whether or not they are a good match. Tari is very feisty, which seems in contrast to Kola, so that shd give you some good tension to play with. I love the situation, though, and the conflict that would arise due to their working relationship. Love the plot. Now the big question: does he or does he not kiss her? :-)

  14. Thanks, Empi. Those two are definitely a handful to write. Watch this space to find out what Kola does. :o))

  15. You did get my attention last thursday as I said, eagerly awaiting today's instalment it is thursday remember so "thrusting" time, I've been refreshing this page allday and nothing yet, the suspense is killing.

  16. The next excerpt is up... Enjoy! :o))

  17. Hello Kiru.
    I couldn't help myself...I'm continuing on from the first excerpt that you submitted for Romantic Friday Writers (RFW).

    You sure know how to keep our attention with these two! I like Kola. He sounds like a stand up kind of guy who would do the right thing. Tari is a fierce tease. I'm sure Peter will get his comeuppance in due time.

    You know I'm off to read the 3rd part.
    You've gone & got me hooked!

  18. Hi Andy, thank you for reading through the excerpts. I love it when my readers connect with the story and follow it.



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