Finally, the day has arrived. My
first book, HIS TREASURE, is out there, now available for readers to buy. I am excited and jubilant,
humbled and thankful. Getting to this day has been quite a ride. There have
been good days and bad days, happy days and sad days, writing days and procrastinating
days.
I really have to acknowledge
Nkem, Sukhi, Henza and Queenie who read the very first rough draft, liked it
and pushed me to polish it for submission. I’m totally grateful to you and the
others who saw the gem in the rough for its true potential.
I also have to mention my editor,
Kristie, whom I must say is fantastic. One of her first comments back to me
when we started editing was just so fabulous I feel like printing it out and framing
it. LOL. But I’ll settle for sharing it with you here.
“I found myself laughing at myself in regard to my reaction
to some of the stuff going in the story. It reminds me of a soap opera, except
there's nothing but good bits and I was "talking" back to the screen.
The love scenes are super steamy without fire [(nice!) (the finger-licking
scene was HOT.)] and the conflict is spot on. I had to remind myself at least
once while reading that the story is set in pre-colonial Nigeria and not the
21st century. Even reading it through I was dreading the scene where Adaku's
brother comes to get her because I know what happens. "Noooooooooo!
Backsies! She didn't mean it, Nnamdi. Everything's cool. Everything's
cool."”
I just smile
every time I read that comment. Kristie, you’re a star!
I’m sure you’re
all wondering what happened in that ‘finger-licking’ scene. Well, since we’re
celebrating today, I thought I’d share a snippet from the scene with you as
part of my Weekend Dirty Dozen post. If you want to read the book blurb, click
here.
HIS TREASURE
excerpt:
***
“My husband,
you know the new yam festival fast approaches,” Adaku spoke as Obinna ate his
dinner. They were in the main chamber of the house, the sleeping rooms led off
directly from it. Seated opposite him at the table, she felt a little
apprehensive about the topic she wanted to discuss with him and shifted
nervously in her chair.
Obinna
looked up at her, his eyes fringed by long dark lashes, a black expressionless
pool that always unnerved her. As she couldn’t read his mood, gauging how to
tell him what she wanted to say was difficult.
“Yes, say
what’s on your mind Adaku,” he said in his usual deep voice as he licked his
long fingers.
Something
stirred low within her belly. Her eyes hungrily followed his action. She got
distracted. For a brief moment she wished it was her fingers he was licking.
“That could
be arranged.”
Adaku looked
up sharply. Obinna’s brow was lifted with amusement. She realized she must
have spoken her thought out loud. Embarrassment and heat washed over her skin
as he took hold of her hand in his large one.
Somewhere
within her mind something shifted. An awareness of Obinna at a primal level
registered in her rapidly hazing brain.
The air
suddenly felt warmer. Her skin prickled. He took each finger into his warm
mouth in turn, twirling his moist tongue around each. Sensation flooded her
body and she forgot everything else she wanted to say. All she could feel was
the stroke of his tongue on her fingers as he sucked and lapped each one.
His touch
scorched her straight to her soul.
She gasped
and his eyes came up, locking onto her and pinning her to the spot. His eyes
were filled with a desire she couldn’t explain. His tongue moved down her skin
searing a path to the spot at the center of her palm before licking it. Then he
released her hand and she realized she was trembling.
It left her
with a need pulsating in her core. Confused too. All he’d done was
lick her fingers. Yet it seemed to turn her into a trembling mass, yearning for
more of his touch. Prince Emeka’s touch had never elicited such a response from
her and she’d thought he was her life
mate.
“What was it
you wanted to ask me or have I already fulfilled it?”
Obinna was
still watching her intensely. His voice had a husky tinge that rumbled through
her. She took a while to catch her breath before she could speak. Willing her
heart rate to return to normal, she stared at her hand still tingling from his
touch.
***
Now you want
to read the rest, don’t you? You can buy your copy via Breathless Press at
$1.99. It is also now available to buy on Amazon.
Oh, I'm also over at The Book Bordello today talking about Jason Statham, Justified and Zorro among other things. Stop by and read it.
If you enjoyed this snippet, stop by and read the other Weekend Dirty Dozen posts too. Have a fantastic weekend, y'all.
If you enjoyed this snippet, stop by and read the other Weekend Dirty Dozen posts too. Have a fantastic weekend, y'all.
Congratulations Kiru!! *happy dancing*
ReplyDeleteAnd what a FANTASTIC scene you shared.
Enjoy your day xx :D
Great scene Kiru! And once again Congrats!! :-D
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely love this scene. Congrats on your release!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on release day. Love this scene and want to read more. Time to fire up the Kindle. x
ReplyDeleteBRILLIANT KIRU... Finger Lickin good lol
ReplyDeleteWoo Hooo!!!!!!!! Congratulations! xxxx
ReplyDeleteHi Kiru. Hasn't this been a super-busy year for us all! Congrats on the release of your novel. It sounds finger-lickin' good. I hope it blasts up the charts with a little help from your friends. I'll be buying it. I'm getting a new e-reader for Christmas so it'll already be full, lol.
ReplyDeleteI'm leaving the linky open for an extra day as I've had a few 'wait!' requests. Gotta get back into the flow...
Denise
Thank you, all for your kind words. It's was a mad exhilarating day. I hope to have more of those. ;)
ReplyDeleteOMGSH... my eyebrows shot up when when read the 'finger licking scene' and so I thank you for the snippet. You are such a wickedly naughty woman. Now I guess I'll just have to get the book
ReplyDeleteHi Empi, thank you for stopping by. What is life without a little bit of naughtiness. LOL. Enjoy the book when you read it.
ReplyDeleteCongrats dear. Dat was awesome. Am so so proud of u. Kip d flag flying. Pls how can i get a copy of dat book? I stay in Lagos.
ReplyDeleteHi Ugonna, thank you so much for your support. His Treasure is currently only available as an eBook. You can buy it from my publisher by going to http://www.breathlesspress.com/his-treasure
ReplyDeleteor clicking on the picture on the top right-hand bar. You can also buy it from Amazon.com if you prefer.
The paperback version of the whole Men of Valor series is out mid-2012.
If you hadn't stopped I would have stopped reading cos it was like watching a soft porn movie in my head.I gave up porn years ago by the power of Jesus and I aint going back to it.Not now not ever.lol!
ReplyDeleteHi upwardliving, you mean you read it to the end and then stopped? LOL
ReplyDeleteSince I don't watch soft porn movies, I don't know what you mean, anyway. But thank you for stopping by and enjoy the rest of your day.