Hi everyone, this is the first Romantic Friday Writers for February. And guess what? It's got a love theme. :)
Yep, the theme is The Long Cool Aphrodisiac. I'm sharing a snippet from A Valentine Challenge. In this scene Michael is infuriated with Kasie because she's been winding him up all evening. It's also obvious he's extremely attracted to her. But she's not making it easy for him. So the sparks are certainly flying. lol. Enjoy it. Don't forget to let me know what you think.
Word Count: 394 (MPA)
Now in his arms, she stopped struggling. He purposefully loosened his grip, half-expecting her to run, the primal part of him looking forward to the chase. She stood rigid, watching him; her chin raised stubbornly, her hands balled at her sides. Her eyes flashed with heat and excitement. Her curvaceous body stayed close to his, her heat and perfume surrounding him, her soft smooth skin enticing him.
Every now and again, the lights
from a passing car flashed by, illuminating both of them on the roadside. In
the recesses of his mind, a thought dared to form to tell him to pull back.
Retreat.
Kasie licked her lips, the
movement of her tongue on her lower lip drawing his attention to her beautiful
lips. A red flag to a bull.
Her action extinguished the
retreat signal in his mind. In its stead was...Load...Engage...Fire.
The world faded. Michael couldn’t
really explain his reaction to this woman. Why she rattled him so much. He knew what he was about to do was probably
extreme. But all he could hear was the whoosh of blood pumping in his ears, his
heart dancing to an erratic tune.
“What do you think you’re doing?”
he heard the tremors in her husky voice.
He ignored her question and asked
one of his own, “Are you going to apologise for your behaviour today?”
He was still a cultured man who
didn’t harm women. He wanted to give her an opportunity to apologise. Of course
he’d let her go if she did. It was only fair. So he waited, expecting the words
of remorse from her lips.
Shoulders straight, she tilted
her chin up, her brown eyes flashing insolently.
“I have nothing to apologise for.
If you think you can scare me with your macho man act, you’ve got another think
coming.”
Her body trembled yet she stood
her ground, her eyes and words daring him to do his worst. A warm fuzzy feeling
permeated the crazed fog in his mind. He admired her courage. Not many people
would look him straight in the eye and dare him to do his worst. His worst had
involved taking lives in the name of his country. If she knew what he was
capable of, would she still dare him? The thought was like a splash of cold
water on his face, sobering him up.
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Don't forget to check out all the love-ly RFW posts this week. Have a fabulous weekend
Sexual potential and danger; both strong aphrodisiacs Kiru. Mix some strong wills - on both sides - and the sparks are gonna fly.
ReplyDeleteExcellent excerpt. You captured the emotions quite well.
......dhole
Thank you, Donna. These two are certainly strong-willed. :)
DeleteDear Kiru,
ReplyDeleteI so agree with Donna here. There is so much tension in this scene that is very well described.
Well done!
Best wishes,
Anna
'To Paul and Julia' Anna's RFW challenge No.31
Dear, Anna. Thank you. I enjoyed writing this scene.
DeleteI liked the tension/danger in this scene, which can be its own special kind of aphrodisiac.
ReplyDeleteScheherazade, danger can be an aphrodisiac sometimes. Thank you.
DeleteKAZAMMMMM!! got to read and review the NOVEL for sure. i'm thinking Blockbuster MOVIE !!
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Oh wow. Thank you, Sidne. I hope you enjoy reading it. :)
DeleteCool? That was downright steaming hot! Off for a cold shower now...
ReplyDeletelol...enjoy the shower. Thank you, Madeleine. :)
DeleteCold shower... now please! This piece is fantastic - danger, tension and what did she do? Can't wait to read the whole thin now!
ReplyDeleteLx
lol...enjoy reading it, Laura. Thank you. :)
DeleteOoh, Kiru, don't we just love a macho man on paper, or on an ebook page, lol! This is a much more forthright Michael than in earlier excerpts I've read. A sizzling book! Fitted the theme perfectly I think. I love that Kasie. What a woman!
ReplyDeleteDenise
lol...Michael is a macho man with heart. And he met his match with Kasie. I'm glad you enjoyed the snippet, Denise. Thank you.
DeleteI wanted to keep reading to see what his worst was. I love their interaction, how the lights from the passing cars gave their setting, but also set an ambiance of mystery. I can't tell if she's into him, but I certainly want her to be.
ReplyDeleteHi Erin, thank you. She's into him alright, she's just not ready to admit it. Women, eh? lol
DeleteBoth are fiery characters, yes!
ReplyDeleteSo much bubbling. Froth on its way for sure;)
They are certainly making steam together. Thanks, Adura. :)
DeleteNicely done. I love the lock and load reference. It's refreshing to view seduction from a male POV.
ReplyDeleteNancy
Thank you, N.R. I enjoy writing from a male POV.
DeleteHello Kiru.
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentines Day!
From the time you joined RFW, I have always been a fan.You have a way of allowing us to live in the moment with your characters. That Kasie sure is one spit-fire of a woman...I can see how she would get under his skin in more ways than one (wink, wink, nudge). Scene setting & conversation are spot on. Nice intrigue at the end too.
Thanks for sharing.
Love Has Seeped Into My Heart
Same to you, Andy. Thanks for sropping by. :)
DeleteThis is so igniting...could feel the heat. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Janaki. I'm glad your enjoyed it.
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