tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post7971684149088788090..comments2023-12-16T08:34:19.484+00:00Comments on Kiru Taye Writes: Let's Talk About Love Scenes (Part 2) with Alyssa FoxKiru Tayehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-23152278115113207572012-01-21T04:44:41.402+00:002012-01-21T04:44:41.402+00:00Thank you, Myne!Thank you, Myne!Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-89737969255675767312012-01-20T22:11:19.425+00:002012-01-20T22:11:19.425+00:00I think the advice is on point. And that's one...I think the advice is on point. And that's one hot excerpt! :) Thanks for sharing, Alyssa.Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-28250505374539465752012-01-20T00:12:47.849+00:002012-01-20T00:12:47.849+00:00Your welcome and the good thing is the advice on w...Your welcome and the good thing is the advice on writing sex scene can work for that too. I don't always write erotic and do contemporary at times, and the language is toned down a lot.Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-84752831530825907952012-01-19T18:44:09.133+00:002012-01-19T18:44:09.133+00:00For me i don't think i want my sex scene to vu...For me i don't think i want my sex scene to vulgar. would like to use making love instead of "fuck", if you get my drift. But i love the advise. And yes it is the most difficult part to write.<br />www.secretlilies.blogspot.comIbifiri Kamsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03935480773984052778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-15349159411674055032012-01-19T16:53:44.475+00:002012-01-19T16:53:44.475+00:00The first one I made up off the top of my head whi...The first one I made up off the top of my head while writing the blog post.<br /><br />Chad doesn't hold back on his thoughts or feelings and very blunt at times.Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-30545644167711017822012-01-19T16:49:51.757+00:002012-01-19T16:49:51.757+00:00Right, Cherie it has to be more than a random scen...Right, Cherie it has to be more than a random scene. The characters have to have feelings for one another, and the readers have to care about them as well. That's why you won't see me writing one in my books in the first chapter. Most of my first ones happen in chapter three. Now in the book I'm working on now they do have sex earlier, but they're married so they already have feelings for one another.Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-81691161851062952852012-01-19T15:27:45.387+00:002012-01-19T15:27:45.387+00:00Yes, the second one is better, but you weren't...Yes, the second one is better, but you weren't fair to the first one, Alyssa. It should have had the entire conversation with the narrative. tsk tsk tsk.<br /><br />That said,<i>When had he ever felt a burn all the way down to his balls before?</i><br />'yawza!' ;-)Empihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01894671064010437610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-85198181378399080002012-01-19T14:01:06.491+00:002012-01-19T14:01:06.491+00:00writing sex scenes can be very challenging i agree...writing sex scenes can be very challenging i agree, i want it to be more the just a random scene i want it to mean someting to the characters and the story as a whole if that makes sense!Cherie Nichollshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10877225088700249643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-53463186199344228492012-01-19T12:26:45.156+00:002012-01-19T12:26:45.156+00:00Thank you for having me. Yes, it can be a challeng...Thank you for having me. Yes, it can be a challenge to write them and back sure it's part of the story, and not just throw in there.Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-78922496317592758852012-01-19T10:17:07.662+00:002012-01-19T10:17:07.662+00:00Alyssa, thank you so much for being here.
I thin...Alyssa, thank you so much for being here. <br /><br />I think writing a great sex scene is a challenge. It is the scene that takes me the longest to write in all my stories. I always want to make sure its more than just a scene in a book but an integral part of the story.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.com