tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post1564939164724714001..comments2023-12-16T08:34:19.484+00:00Comments on Kiru Taye Writes: #RomanticFridayWriters: I Should've Kissed YouKiru Tayehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-53669815789243435372012-10-12T02:12:38.578+01:002012-10-12T02:12:38.578+01:00Thank you, Michael, Rek, Geri, Igbophilia and Beve...Thank you, Michael, Rek, Geri, Igbophilia and Beverly Diehl.<br /><br />The manuscript is now with the editor. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-70615964790609538892012-10-01T15:21:51.469+01:002012-10-01T15:21:51.469+01:00Eons, later, I am finally here. Love the tension b...Eons, later, I am finally here. Love the tension between these two.<br /><br />It's "Christy" everywhere else, "Christ" when she's standing in the doorway. Also, love her caramel lips, but not sure she should also have a caramel face. I like the detail of her Ankara skirt - but would a GUY call it that, or would he just know it was something swirly? Can you give us that when you switch to her POV. <br /><br />Love the story, can't wait to read what happens next.Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-86506303873512818072012-09-22T00:25:43.458+01:002012-09-22T00:25:43.458+01:00WHY? Why did she leave?WHY? Why did she leave?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-12638150451464341472012-09-21T04:05:25.603+01:002012-09-21T04:05:25.603+01:00Woop woop Kiru's back!! I'm all late to t...Woop woop Kiru's back!! I'm all late to the party lol. Okay, first things first, I appreciate hearing the male perspective too. <br />It's refreshing to be in his head with him. I love that she's making him work for whatever it is that he's done. <br /><br />Secondly, afro hair in a twistout? Ankara skirt?? Love love love it! <br /><br />So... when are we getting more?Gerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11326345886576571752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-37836885023923726622012-09-11T19:56:32.975+01:002012-09-11T19:56:32.975+01:00I forgot to add, congrats on the award. :)I forgot to add, congrats on the award. :)Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-76779250193228296042012-09-11T19:56:06.754+01:002012-09-11T19:56:06.754+01:00This is so good. Steamy, angry, with tension and d...This is so good. Steamy, angry, with tension and desire.<br />Like Michael said, you do the male POV well. I will definitely come back to see what happens next.Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-57109969688335164062012-09-11T14:35:27.340+01:002012-09-11T14:35:27.340+01:00Hi, Kiru,
Its nice to see a strong MALE POV. Very...Hi, Kiru,<br /><br />Its nice to see a strong MALE POV. Very authentic voice. Well done.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-10048599810149570752012-09-10T13:49:51.689+01:002012-09-10T13:49:51.689+01:00Thank you, Rhonda. It's great to see you here....Thank you, Rhonda. It's great to see you here. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-63213865775193957712012-09-10T13:49:20.083+01:002012-09-10T13:49:20.083+01:00I really like that song. There are so many version...I really like that song. There are so many version of it but this one is good too.<br /><br />Thank you so much. Yes, I had caramel on my mind too. LOLKiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-91352549122397649042012-09-10T13:48:02.018+01:002012-09-10T13:48:02.018+01:00Thank you, Nilanjana. Come back soon. :)Thank you, Nilanjana. Come back soon. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-59309734279370948472012-09-10T13:47:27.199+01:002012-09-10T13:47:27.199+01:00I'll be delving into Christy's head to fin...I'll be delving into Christy's head to find out why she's so pissed off. Thank you.<br /><br />Yes, it wasn't Christ standing at the door, though it would've been s pleasant surprise for Joshua too. LOL. Thanks for the critique.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-37513191989570531052012-09-10T13:45:02.982+01:002012-09-10T13:45:02.982+01:00LOL. Thank you, Francine. ;)LOL. Thank you, Francine. ;)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-73232132502335007002012-09-10T13:43:59.963+01:002012-09-10T13:43:59.963+01:00Thank you, Madeleine!Thank you, Madeleine!Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-26289308285917927292012-09-10T13:43:21.091+01:002012-09-10T13:43:21.091+01:00Men can be clueless and Joshua is certainly in the...Men can be clueless and Joshua is certainly in the dark at the moment. lol<br /><br />Thanks for the correction. I giggled when I read the post and saw Christ at the door.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-15173473627822970912012-09-10T13:41:35.453+01:002012-09-10T13:41:35.453+01:00Oh, she's a feisty one. He's going to work...Oh, she's a feisty one. He's going to work so much harder by the time the story is done. Thanks, Sally. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-51869740518672436012012-09-10T13:40:17.576+01:002012-09-10T13:40:17.576+01:00Thank you, D. I'd like to know what's in t...Thank you, D. I'd like to know what's in the envelope too. ;)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-31574025761349464232012-09-10T13:39:11.350+01:002012-09-10T13:39:11.350+01:00He certainly doesn't trust her motives at the ...He certainly doesn't trust her motives at the moment. So that could be a big problem. Thanks, Yolanda. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-25448808378782491992012-09-10T13:36:51.602+01:002012-09-10T13:36:51.602+01:00More soon, hopefully. Thanks, Crystal. :)More soon, hopefully. Thanks, Crystal. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-54892737617551483002012-09-10T13:36:14.034+01:002012-09-10T13:36:14.034+01:00You're right. He is angry. But you know men......You're right. He is angry. But you know men... :) Thank you, Adura.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-69069101759009484202012-09-10T13:34:46.507+01:002012-09-10T13:34:46.507+01:00You're so kind, Anna. Thank you.You're so kind, Anna. Thank you.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-85482253012999768172012-09-10T13:33:49.534+01:002012-09-10T13:33:49.534+01:00Yes, she's not very happy with him at the mome...Yes, she's not very happy with him at the moment. Thank you, Heather.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-46453370074883432702012-09-09T18:37:57.428+01:002012-09-09T18:37:57.428+01:00Sorry to get here so late, but just wanted to say ...Sorry to get here so late, but just wanted to say I really liked this excerpt. Can't wait to read the rest. :-)Rhonda Hopkinshttp://rhondahopkins.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-14343536354592460922012-09-09T18:35:05.030+01:002012-09-09T18:35:05.030+01:00you put this song in my head and I had to listen t...you put this song in my head and I had to listen to it first:<br />http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T2NEU6Xf7lM&feature=related<br /><br />Congrats on the award Kiru. I feel your excitement.<br /><br />This was a sensual treat. Made me hungry for caramel :) Loved the characters; nicely built tension. Very hot! Reading the prior kiss description I certainly wanted to experience it again.<br /><br />Thanks for participating this week.<br /><br />........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-72593152817649948682012-09-09T09:25:27.268+01:002012-09-09T09:25:27.268+01:00Interesting...will have to come back and find out ...Interesting...will have to come back and find out what happens next..Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-1863839531083049032012-09-09T07:59:46.366+01:002012-09-09T07:59:46.366+01:00Congratulations KIru! You're back! And with at...Congratulations KIru! You're back! And with attitude! Yes, Hallelujah! Yes, this is a Christmas Story alright! Love your hot characters and am wondering what's going on here. I'm sure you'll enlighten us. You had me with his name right at the beginning - Joshua Inemo-Spiff. What a name. You nailed him. But what about Christy?<br /><br />Critique: I think you don't need 'accomplishing' in para. 2, and I wonder if Christ was standing at the door or whether you meant 'Christy'. Never mind, Christ got my attention.<br /><br />Thank you for posting for us again Kiru. Have certainly missed your sensuous stories.<br /><br />The use of the prompt sentence at the end really nailed the prompt.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.com