tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post6736783629723752243..comments2023-12-16T08:34:19.484+00:00Comments on Kiru Taye Writes: Romantic Friday Writers - New HorizonsKiru Tayehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-58584355189390817272011-08-26T09:16:11.566+01:002011-08-26T09:16:11.566+01:00LD, Uche and SS, thank you. I'm glad you like ...LD, Uche and SS, thank you. I'm glad you like it.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-17761956672332898742011-08-23T18:03:03.822+01:002011-08-23T18:03:03.822+01:00The opening lines are vividly descriptive.The firs...The opening lines are vividly descriptive.The first meeting between the hero and the heroine is well told.Strong Selfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05022151139985515400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-12386796589688276952011-08-23T16:58:04.306+01:002011-08-23T16:58:04.306+01:00Congrats KT, so happy for you!Congrats KT, so happy for you!Uche Umezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04653142160681851748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-57813155510145304012011-08-22T19:18:50.932+01:002011-08-22T19:18:50.932+01:00Loving it ( but then you probably know that I love...Loving it ( but then you probably know that I love everything you write, right)?LDhttp://laradanielswrites.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-49878341164015443412011-08-21T12:38:20.804+01:002011-08-21T12:38:20.804+01:00Anna, thank you so much. I appreciate you stopping...Anna, thank you so much. I appreciate you stopping by.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-78213323391280805432011-08-20T19:20:31.723+01:002011-08-20T19:20:31.723+01:00Dear Kiru,
Thank you for your kind words about my ...Dear Kiru,<br />Thank you for your kind words about my story about Cissi and Selma!<br /><br />Your text for 'New Horizons' is very well-written. I agree with Paula Martin about how you make the reader feel the long wait at the airport with Ebony. We feel the change in climate and her anticipation about the person (Felix) whom she is to meet. <br /><br />I'm curious about what happens next to Ebony and Felix.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><br />For the benefit of other readers:<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/08/new-horizons-romantic-friday-writers-no.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's RFW No.15-'New Horizons: Cissi tells Selma...'</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-26933623092512230742011-08-20T16:31:02.819+01:002011-08-20T16:31:02.819+01:00Wow, Paula. I won a prize. I'm popping over st...Wow, Paula. I won a prize. I'm popping over straight away. Thank you. :o))Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-60953808634972665922011-08-20T16:29:46.010+01:002011-08-20T16:29:46.010+01:00Hi All, thank you for your lovely comments. I real...Hi All, thank you for your lovely comments. I really appreciate it. This story is dear to me as it is one of my first full-length novels.<br /><br />Ebony and Felix are so special and so vivid for me, sometimes they feel like close friends.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-48221955072431165002011-08-20T11:27:32.767+01:002011-08-20T11:27:32.767+01:00Excellent snippet, an excellent description of arr...Excellent snippet, an excellent description of arriving at the airport (been there, done that!) plus the bonus of an intriguing stranger!<br /><br />BTW If you visit my blog, you'll see that I'm offering you an interview or guest blog (on either or both of my blogs). Please leave me your email address so that we can arrange this :-)Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-22344019415645462112011-08-20T01:19:19.780+01:002011-08-20T01:19:19.780+01:00Kiru, you have intrigued us all with your snippet...Kiru, you have intrigued us all with your snippet. Sounds like it could be a sizzling story to come and set in such an exotic place. I hope we get to read more...<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-74004313513494067992011-08-20T00:26:28.111+01:002011-08-20T00:26:28.111+01:00Loved it, and especially the humorous vulnerable t...Loved it, and especially the humorous vulnerable touch at the end, where she almost looks behind her to see who he's headed to meet.Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-38210695488959316622011-08-19T23:47:30.825+01:002011-08-19T23:47:30.825+01:00Intriguing first meeting, Kiru. Those ones are usu...Intriguing first meeting, Kiru. Those ones are usually very tricky but you handled it well!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-65524092071817336872011-08-19T21:46:53.269+01:002011-08-19T21:46:53.269+01:00It definitely suits the theme, and the story feels...It definitely suits the theme, and the story feels fresh each time I read it...Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-49775232177010926332011-08-19T20:41:15.783+01:002011-08-19T20:41:15.783+01:00Hi,
Hint of romance to come, perhaps, and definit...Hi,<br /><br />Hint of romance to come, perhaps, and definitely something in her past driving her home! ;)<br /><br />Nicely written, and intriguing snippet.<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-33397483598949860372011-08-19T19:18:31.519+01:002011-08-19T19:18:31.519+01:00Very interesting characters. Strong descriptions o...Very interesting characters. Strong descriptions of both them and their surroudnings, too. <br />Enjoyable read, thank you.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-61020767119263796572011-08-19T19:09:49.268+01:002011-08-19T19:09:49.268+01:00Oh, yeah. This sounds like the start of something ...Oh, yeah. This sounds like the start of something new. This makes me wonder why he's be there to collect her, since she doesn't know him. I like that she equates him with being a warrior, which he is, just in another way.J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-86874564074659665312011-08-19T15:49:32.638+01:002011-08-19T15:49:32.638+01:00I like the snippet. It got me wondering what the h...I like the snippet. It got me wondering what the heroine is running away from and what she's going to encounter with the handsome warrior :)Tolulope Popoolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04824894132453805811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-44101859926664014672011-08-19T15:28:42.099+01:002011-08-19T15:28:42.099+01:00Oh, this is very intriguing. Definitely makes me ...Oh, this is very intriguing. Definitely makes me want to get into the story. I like the hint of a past that needs healing and the description of the man is fantastic. He is so vivid and clear and larger than life.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13195645967378589211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-79195770594124621172011-08-19T14:59:30.359+01:002011-08-19T14:59:30.359+01:00Thank you, thewordsmythe. I'm glad that comes ...Thank you, thewordsmythe. I'm glad that comes across well.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-68094964751554166832011-08-19T14:02:39.693+01:002011-08-19T14:02:39.693+01:00There's something poignant about that first me...There's something poignant about that first meeting of hero and heroine and you've captured it here so well, Kiru.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com