tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post565355459878083894..comments2023-12-16T08:34:19.484+00:00Comments on Kiru Taye Writes: Thrusty Thursday - News and HWB Excerpt 4Kiru Tayehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-91739330762237298872011-08-05T07:11:35.320+01:002011-08-05T07:11:35.320+01:00Hi Andy,
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kin...Hi Andy,<br /><br />Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.<br /><br />Kola and Tari are certainly in-lust. They've only been together for less than a day, so it's no sweeping love affair yet. LOL<br /><br />Cheers,<br />KiruKiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-75925833185958115712011-08-04T23:29:02.719+01:002011-08-04T23:29:02.719+01:00Hello Kiru.
Congratulations on the contract! Good ...Hello Kiru.<br />Congratulations on the contract! Good things do happen to those of us who work hard!<br /><br />Now to this excerpt...I almost missed this part. My work schedule has been crazy and I haven't visited much. <br /><br />What a tease you are to only give us so much. I love your storytelling. You held my attention from from excerpt 1. These two are too hot for each other. I don't think they have anything in common except lust. Great visuals, especially with the phone interrupt. Can't even begin to imagine what might have happened otherwise! Keep them coming, I'm on board!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-30007616026430559052011-08-04T14:40:06.307+01:002011-08-04T14:40:06.307+01:00Thank you, Shaifamily and Think-About-It. I really...Thank you, Shaifamily and Think-About-It. I really appreciate it.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-21970473942021521762011-08-04T00:21:38.458+01:002011-08-04T00:21:38.458+01:00Congrats Kiru!
I'm enjoying your style of writ...Congrats Kiru!<br />I'm enjoying your style of writing. Would love to read more so I'm glad u got that nod. All the best!Think-About-Ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04361623292147095716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-38134732792057588662011-08-01T16:06:24.733+01:002011-08-01T16:06:24.733+01:00OOOOOOOk. You got me hooked.
Thursday it is then....OOOOOOOk. You got me hooked.<br /><br />Thursday it is then.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13680206081213726561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-34575042118921243792011-08-01T14:17:04.409+01:002011-08-01T14:17:04.409+01:00Thank you everyone for your kind wishes! More HWB ...Thank you everyone for your kind wishes! More HWB back on thursday.<br /><br />Beverly, i hope you get one too soon. <br /><br />Denise, thank you. I would be grateful for any help. :o))Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-71076109910690060592011-07-31T06:21:37.192+01:002011-07-31T06:21:37.192+01:00Hi Kiru. Congratulations on the contract! Great ne...Hi Kiru. Congratulations on the contract! Great news! Your dedication and talent has reaped you rewards. Can't wait to read more. Loved your excerpt. Novel idea to have 'phone interruptus.'<br /><br />Should you need publicity support, I'm sure many of your followers will be ready to host you on their blogs if you should wish it.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-26745755127944179742011-07-31T00:52:28.649+01:002011-07-31T00:52:28.649+01:00You already know about me and Kola, so Kiru, let m...You already know about me and Kola, so Kiru, let me save THAT comment, lol. And you already know what I think about your good news!! One year is no joke, babes, I'm glad it's finally paid off. See you at your book signing!! (I'll be first on the queue lol)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-8958306386051279742011-07-30T21:07:48.416+01:002011-07-30T21:07:48.416+01:00Congrats on the contract.
OMG this was such a gre...Congrats on the contract.<br /><br />OMG this was such a great excerpt. Man, do I want him . .<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-29834636983066014912011-07-30T17:20:49.635+01:002011-07-30T17:20:49.635+01:00Woo-hoo, congratulations! Couldn't be happier...Woo-hoo, congratulations! Couldn't be happier (for someone else. I admit, I <em>could</em> be happier, if it was me, lol!)<br /><br />Thrusty Thursdays - at first I thought that was a typo, but it wasn't, in a very good way. Or bad way.<br /><br />Loved this post. :-)Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-45202896540051146642011-07-30T02:57:52.422+01:002011-07-30T02:57:52.422+01:00Go Kiru! Go Kiru! Go Kiru! Go go go go go go :D
C...Go Kiru! Go Kiru! Go Kiru! Go go go go go go :D<br /><br />Congratulations again girl. You deserve every good thing that comes your way. Hard work really does pay off :)LDhttp://laradanielswrites.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-54193642126401320722011-07-30T00:15:57.418+01:002011-07-30T00:15:57.418+01:00Congrats and am certainly looking forward to the b...Congrats and am certainly looking forward to the book(s) <br />And not fair with the except......too shortayabaodusotehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02517434492013866537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-29861145852535237292011-07-29T22:00:29.344+01:002011-07-29T22:00:29.344+01:00Congrats on your contract and yes, you do write pa...Congrats on your contract and yes, you do write passionate romance. I wanted to read more. What happened to put him off, etc.?J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-30681067020874427802011-07-29T17:00:53.190+01:002011-07-29T17:00:53.190+01:00Congrats! I'm very happy for you. :-DCongrats! I'm very happy for you. :-DMisha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-46848993361534460442011-07-29T11:38:39.832+01:002011-07-29T11:38:39.832+01:00Congratulations on the contract! Yay!
Will wait ...Congratulations on the contract! Yay! <br /><br />Will wait eagerly for Tari to come back on Thursday!Nashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14984530648140460594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-52000129222545578002011-07-28T22:53:44.237+01:002011-07-28T22:53:44.237+01:00Adura Ojo, thank you. I hope you come back for mor...Adura Ojo, thank you. I hope you come back for more.<br /><br />Myne, haba... which kind of trouble again? lolKiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-66490286537137139892011-07-28T22:50:21.282+01:002011-07-28T22:50:21.282+01:00Anonymous, 7 days not that far away. ;)
Empire76,...Anonymous, 7 days not that far away. ;)<br /><br />Empire76, thanks for the corrections.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-35721431651599206072011-07-28T22:48:14.177+01:002011-07-28T22:48:14.177+01:00Ritchie, thank you.
Uche, it's great to see y...Ritchie, thank you.<br /><br />Uche, it's great to see you here. I'm glad you like it.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-83960754200882744782011-07-28T21:33:54.964+01:002011-07-28T21:33:54.964+01:00This is so hot! I couldn't go on o, or put mys...This is so hot! I couldn't go on o, or put myself in trouble, lol...Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-4647184280205446852011-07-28T19:45:05.433+01:002011-07-28T19:45:05.433+01:00I'm loving this. Yay to thrusty Thursdays!
Con...I'm loving this. Yay to thrusty Thursdays!<br />Congrats on your publishing offer. It certainly is nice to be validated and to know that your self belief and hard work is paying off.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09467664797856391600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-62005378667703330062011-07-28T15:32:21.986+01:002011-07-28T15:32:21.986+01:00First off, congrats on the book deal! Giving up wo...First off, congrats on the book deal! Giving up work was a very bold step. Kudos.<br /><br />Girl you didn’t lie! The previous chapters were definitely safe. Kola is definitely not what I expected from the first couple of chapters. So there was a hidden dragon underneath, ehn? I liked how he was in charge here. Gotta love almost-sex-scenes.<br /><br />A couple of thing to note:<br />-<i>“Do you?” (h)e persisted</i><br />I’m pretty sure ‘he persisted’ should act as a speech tag, so you need a small h.<br /><br />-<i>“In that case I’m going to show-,” he didn’t finish and froze instead.</i><br /><br />Definitely don’t combine a dash and a comma. And I’d recommend an em dash instead of a single dash. Finally, the use of the dash conveys the same idea as the descriptor ‘he didn’t finish’. You can therefore get rid of the descriptor, and just go the the action, which I think has a stronger effect.<br /><br />So you’ll have something like: <br /><br />“In that case I’m going to show—” He froze, then reached into his back pocket...<br /><br />Cheers<br />EmpiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-79698089776785012392011-07-28T14:27:30.305+01:002011-07-28T14:27:30.305+01:00Do you really mean we have to wait another 7 days ...Do you really mean we have to wait another 7 days for the next instalment? <br /><br />Congrats on the validation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-54617543536250497602011-07-28T13:07:45.190+01:002011-07-28T13:07:45.190+01:00loving this tantalizing aperitif..loving this tantalizing aperitif..Uche Umezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04653142160681851748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-21551307180151082002011-07-28T11:00:13.649+01:002011-07-28T11:00:13.649+01:00Great news and hearty congratulations Kiru! First ...Great news and hearty congratulations Kiru! First steps of your dream being realised and the efforts of your hard work being rewarded. You're flying now and keep soaring!Ritchiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15080718862159563122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-504800520107358646.post-8495719479584758282011-07-28T10:41:03.808+01:002011-07-28T10:41:03.808+01:00Thanks, Francine!
Amanda, you have to blame Kola ...Thanks, Francine!<br /><br />Amanda, you have to blame Kola for being so noble. Not my fault at all. LOL. Thank you. ;)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.com